Loops in Time

 


A feral night

unable to sleep

my mind creating loops in time

as I finally succumbed, completely numb

sinking into the deep abyss


The morning arrived with knives

as sunlight became daggers

of insight and pain

*maybe just an aching back, Idk*


But then the dreams denied

came flooding through my eyes

my life so hard to see

when all I feel is .... us


A sense of self dissolving 

into something greater than I

my only thoughts are three simple words

defining space and time


I love you


 

Comments

  1. BeckyAugust 20, 2025 at 5:31 AM

    "as sunlight became daggers
    of insight and pain
    *maybe just an aching back, Idk*"

    This made me smile. And the ending is lovely.

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